question about a song...

[Florent]

Bravo, c'est quasi-parfait !

Pour le 1er point d'interrogation, je dirais :

"It's as if you try to illuminate
The smallest little pieces of our love"

Et pour le 2ème (et j'en profite pour corriger le dernier mot de la phrase) :

"As a diminishing signal of our fate"

Ce qui nous donne :

For people like me I'm not on stage
But your music I don't think you know what it does
It's as if you try to illuminate
The smallest little pieces of our love

Close your eyes
I want you to remember me this way
I want you to remember the place
I want you to visualize your saving grace

For people like me I'm all alone
But your music it helps me to wait
It's as if you stand up for a song
As a diminishing signal of our fate (X2)

Close your eyes
I want you to remember me this way
I want you to remember the place
I want you to visualize your saving grace

Your arms in my heart
It's better than your heart in my arms
Your arms in my heart
It's better than your heart in my arms

I want you to remember me this way
I want you to remember the place
I want you to visualize your saving grace

It's all right
You don't have to worry anymore (X2)

Ca me paraît bon !